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Restaurant Review
Restaurant reviews help people choose restaurants . They tell the reader about the food, prices, location ,service. therfore I write two restaurant review , one for student newspaper and one for magazine for gourmet cooks . "the Roses" is a great restaurant for student and "The stinking Rose" restaurant for gourmet cooks. So You can check the best and worst restaurants in your city.
"The Roses" restaurant is informal and old-fashioned . The service was not good . There are two dining rooms full of too many people, for example you have to wait a long time for your food because the waiters are not fast . The food is Italian and all the dishes are made with garlic. And the meal was not served properly and it was not delicious, Such as the chicken was not cooked well, the soup is cold and the fruits are not fresh. Prices are reasonable. Appetizers are from $ 6.00 to $ 9.00 Entrées are from $10,50 to $ 15,00 .
On the contrary , "The stinking Rose" restaurant is fancy and trendy .They are decorated with many pictures and the music accompanies dinner. The service are excellent but, you have to reserve in advance .for example ,you can not make your order on the phone, you have to come. The chef has worked at many famous restaurants also, waiters are very friendly and fast. The food is expensive . Appetizers are from $ 30.00 t o$ 70.00 Entrées are from $ 500,50 to $ 700,00 . They serve a lot of delicious seafood for dessert, you can order seafood ice cream !.
Lots of all In my eyes I think that restaurants reviews are very impotent to help people choose restaurants. You can also check the best and worst in your city. It's like a service that lets you track all new restaurants and hygiene inspection ratings for all restaurants.
i am a student. i would like to improve my english writing
Restaurant Review
Restaurant reviews help people choose restaurants . They tell the reader about the food, prices, location ,service. therfore I write two restaurant review , one for student newspaper and one for magazine for gourmet cooks . "the Roses" is a great restaurant for student and "The stinking Rose" restaurant for gourmet cooks. So You can check the best and worst restaurants in your city.
"The Roses" restaurant is informal and old-fashioned . The service was not good . There are two dining rooms full of too many people, for example you have to wait a long time for your food because the waiters are not fast . The food is Italian and all the dishes are made with garlic. And the meal was not served properly and it was not delicious, Such as the chicken was not cooked well, the soup is cold and the fruits are not fresh. Prices are reasonable. Appetizers are from $ 6.00 to $ 9.00 Entrées are from $10,50 to $ 15,00 .
On the contrary , "The stinking Rose" restaurant is fancy and trendy .They are decorated with many pictures and the music accompanies dinner. The service are excellent but, you have to reserve in advance .for example ,you can not make your order on the phone, you have to come. The chef has worked at many famous restaurants also, waiters are very friendly and fast. The food is expensive . Appetizers are from $ 30.00 t o$ 70.00 Entrées are from $ 500,50 to $ 700,00 . They serve a lot of delicious seafood for dessert, you can order seafood ice cream !.
Lots of all In my eyes I think that restaurants reviews are very impotent to help people choose restaurants. You can also check the best and worst in your city. It's like a service that lets you track all new restaurants and hygiene inspection ratings for all restaurants.